Untitled Poem

[-=ReD-hAzE=-]

I'm At That Place Again,
Floating, Feelings Encompassing,
Taking In, All Of It, Everything,
Sinking Weightless Forever,
The Walls Are Ethereal,
I See Everything, All Of It,
None Of It, Even Matters Anymore,
I'm Alone, With All Of Me,
Silent Thoughts Overflowing,
Spilling Over Dream Walls,
Of That Place I'm In,
Floating, Feelings Encompassing...


Let me know what you think.

 

[PLUSH]

That is a lot of the way I feel. Amazing things happen when you pierce the veil, and see through the illusion. Keep on trying. Eventually you control your own life, and it won't be just random happenings. Love the peice.

 

[-=ReD-hAzE=-]

Bump.

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