untitled...no. 1

[Elle07]

I could stand to be alone for some time
Lose myself in white noise
slip into the blur
contemplate the color yellow
Right now
I just don't handle splashes too well
Or too many teeth
around me all at once
armed like guns with something to say
Urgent whispers
hoarse restraint
Quiet as paper cuts
people steal me away
cart my flesh off in tiny crimson piles
my bones have been sore
Rattling against each other
in their anemic cage
ravens circling
my heart beating
it's-time to-go it's-time to-go
someplace full of surf
full of flat blue sky
full of shush

 

[liljulz]

I'm not sure I understand the whole of it but I defnitely like the way you put it together

 

[yoUr bLiSS]

awesome awesome work...i loved it..