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[Traumatizd]

Everything is falling apart
and i don't know who to blame
With a mother who drinks her problems away
And a father that does the same
A life thats not worth living
A living hell all the time
The world is crumbling around me
And i don't know why
Should i even bother
The pain is so immence
My life is so chaotic
It doesen't make any sense
----This isn't done but this is all i have right now

 

[RichieM]

Keep pouring out. Very expressive. All life is worth living. Don't give up the search to figure out why!

 

[Traumatizd]

yea, the only problem i have with this is that it rhymes and i hate when my songs/poems rhyme because it makes it sound like Dr. Suess or something.

 

[RichieM]

Don't worry about the rhyming. Definitely not Dr. Seussish and it gives it a good flow and structure!

 

[cand-E bamber]

dr seuss would be proud of your rhyming skills *thumbs up*