Underestimated..

[frostyangel]

The ceiling fell.
And so did my entire life.

Are you there anymore..
Because, I am.

And when did it end..
Better yet, I missed
where it began..

I saw a smile that I
didn't reconize, back
when I knew it wasn't
able to hide.

And then the fight of
you and me.. was only
seen within my eyes.

I want to see you not
give up.. give me a
clue of what this means

And while you say it
is all okay..

I'm pushing open my
eyes.. to make up for
the times I couldn't
look up at you..

I'm scrapping up the
details of a distant
sunset of the first
time we held hands.

I'm wiping up the
puddle of mush the
day we first kissed.

While we watched something
that I can't remember..

And still my heartbeat..
And your heart moved on.

I am silent.

In fear that if I begin to
think,
breathe,
speak..

I just might crumble.
I just might begin to cry.

And when your strong hand
reaches toward my face,
to wipe the tears that fell
from my unblinking eyes..I
won't push it away.. because
I am in love with you..

And you grow.
I stay.

You move.
I squeeze.

You deal.
I saciface.

And you, steal..
from me.

The only heart that I ever
known. And there is a delicous
taste of nothing to hold on too.

When did I start to become so
dragged into this life
were I forgot what was really
in control..where did all those
little dreams go that use to fill
my dreams with peace at night..

Because you were the one that held me
tight, when nothing ever felt right..


*note(fiction)

 

[E-girl]

And when your strong hand
reaches toward my face,
to wipe the tears that fell
from my unblinking eyes..I
won't push it away.. because
I am in love with you..

And you grow.
I stay.

You move.
I squeeze.

You deal.
I saciface.

simply great.

 

[FixXxer]

sounds too similar to my life, beautifully written.
simple, and the truth. the way i like it.

 

[haste]

beautifully written as always

 

[neverwas]

The only heart that I ever
known. And there is a delicous
taste of nothing to hold on too.

When did I start to become so
dragged into this life
were I forgot what was really
in control..where did all those
little dreams go that use to fill
my dreams with peace at night..

Because you were the one that held me
tight, when nothing ever felt right..

...enough said...

 

[cherub]

FA
amazing words girl, i loved reading this,, sometimes fictional is just as great cause you can let it lead your mind to outstanding places and amazing words like this

*hugs*