um, welcome

[Dastrix Slogan]

um, welcome,
to my place.
it's a little fu..
um,
untidy at the moment, i wasn't expecting company,
but its good, good that you are here,
you know.
yes I do spend a lot of time here,
yeah, the king of my castle.

{the boy in the bubble}

oh, yes, the security, well you cant be too careful these days,
don't know who you can trust, anymore,
you know,
but hey, you're here so..
um, yes, sorry, I havent really had time to fix it all up,
you see the last people I had in here
kinda wrecked the place, im still cleaning up their mess,

{kinda messes it up for you, doesn't it?}

oh that, that's my room,
no, no, they never got in there. just peeked in the door, every now and then.
yes,
I suppose that's why it is brighter than the rest of the place
very bright..
it's actualy so bright there sometimes that
even,

{even when it's winter, the warmth and the light
will make you believe you could open a window
and every single tiny particle,
of a green-blue summer,
could flow gently in}

i, im sorry
i cannot let you in there
it's kind of like, my, um,
yes sanctuary, that's what it is.
you know,
shit! you're bleeding, how..
you cut yourself? where? the fence? well it was designed to keep people ou..
please, don't cry

{can i really do this again?
did you break yourself on my walls?
or did I break you with them?
can i, REALLY, do this again?}

just a minute, i'll go get something for that..

 

[chrissy]

well wow. i love this: the style, the metaphors, the scenery created...
wonderful. id like to see more of ur stuff

chrissy

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

Thank You Chrissy! Always nice to have someone enjoy my work! Do a search in words for me, I have a couple of posts, they all have different stlyes tho.

 

[Innocuous]

what can I say...

that's fucking brillent.

 

[nick44]

I really, uh, like this a lot. Because sometimes you are thinking, and, you want to tell somebody something like, real important, and the words don't come out of your, you know, mouth the way you want. And each mistake, but it's not really a mistake, seems to make you feel like you have to tell somebody more because that is the way it is. And by saying more words you say less - but you really say more.

Nice style. =)