Two inmates

[Strawberry_lovemuffin]

Eyes open but seeing nothing
Walking, but sinking

This irrepairable thing
Will slowly smother me
Like an umbillical cord

And the hand I keep reaching out
Is losing strength.

Two inmates in a cozy prison
With silence our warden
This liquid quiets the roar in my head
I toast like Judas
And wait for another small death
The absence of your touch creates.

 

[Pantomime7]

Nice. I like.

 

[katmeow]

I toast like Judas
And wait for another small death
The absence of your touch creates.

Those lines are great, so bittersweet. Nice work

 

[Samadhi]

And the hand I keep reaching out
Is losing strength.

I can identify... oh jeez how i can.... so perfectly put.

Beautiful words C.