two boys and a girl.

[Raz]

So you're looking at me and I can tell what you think;

I want to see you fuck my girlfriend; I want to see her sit on top of you, your cock disappear inside of her, her tits bounce as she rides you, my breath on both your faces while your tongues swap spit.

But this is what I think;

you're on your back, excited breath making your ribcage swell and fall; she's squatting on you and your face is full of her pussy, wetness making your chin glossy while you eat her out. My hands are on your hips while I kneel before you, and my eyes meet hers as I fuck you hard and unrelenting.

Your groans are buried beneath the slam of my groin and the weight of her cunt; there's a kind of crazy lust in that we both want you to ourselves but we're happy to see the other person use you. As long as we keep sight of what we both want, you're an aphrodesiac.

All we want is to get off and you're just the thing we use.

We know you like it that way.

..

 

[Jabberwocky]

wow. im unsure what to say about this. erotically charged without shame, allowing the reader to slip into the mental flares of a triad and enjoying the process. thanks for letting me be voyeristic.

 

[New]

I tingled a bit when I read this. Yes, it is erotically charged - extremely, in fact - but what I appreciated was the radically different scenarios of the two men...which weren't really that different at all, given that they had the same goal in the end.

This was a nice chunk to chew on.

 

[posse27]

wow..very hot, intense...sexually charged, i kinda wanted to be the other guy....i enjoyed it, i loved the line "we know you like it that way"
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