Trembling Mind

[Altered_Soul9]

Sealed within these barriers
Hopes shattered, dreams wrecked
Imprisoned by my own mind
Thoughts mangled, vision blurred
Fingernails shredded on glass
Tongue removed, eyes blinded

~Voices fade into the dust
~Words begin to rust
Caught up in a trembling mind
Searches made just to find
Scholars who lack the time
To explain what makes it mine.

Ruptured vessels sink to swim
Senses fail, bravery united
Honors bestowed upon the needy
Oaths upheld, freedoms lost
Crosses cut to gather knowledge
Heaven cries, Hell rejoices

~Bodies fade into the dust
~Minds begin to rust
Caught up in a trembling mind
Searches made just to find
Scholars who lack the time
To explain what makes it mine

 

[BrightEyesIsMe]

Nice

 

[RareForm]

your best, friend.

 

[Altered_Soul9]

^thanks

 

[cherub]

I like the tone to it,, definately up there .... nice job !