trampling the other half of the other side

[TiberCross]

a natural distraction for two things to tear apart
two people dissecting facts and taking the patience
to start from the heart

you may be right about the many forgotten broken promises
but both of our opinions are aceptable answers
niether one of us should feel held hostage

so, what about that forever and always
that i'll love you no matter what becomes of
children and the future
building inside a feeling that at once overwhelmed us
but left us trampling the other half of the other side

 

[RareForm]

this one really speaks to me right now, I really liked it

 

[neverwas]

so, what about that forever and always
that i'll love you no matter what becomes of
children and the future

this was beautiful

 

[up all night]

This was wonderful. The more I read of your work the more I like it.

 

[cherub]

i enjoyed reading this,,,, maybe for you it is a look to the future and things that may be,,, me i see a dream of life i once thought to believe goes a certain way at one time.

lovely words almost words of rememberance