Toxic Aura: You and I

[RareForm]

A drifted thought strays through to December
I'd hoped to silence the demons in my echoes
I'll never hold my tongue until I choke, please help me
If silence is golden, why is it frowned upon.

You have yet to hark the said English, I wonder
I wonder,
Can you even form syllable to syllable, I question
Don't fret you ferocious hindrance
I was never good enough for your loved, My patience
My patience,
It's dwindling, and I fight your fancied persona
Perplexity engages in my silly personal vendetta
Your future is mine own, I render my happiness.

I crashed,
You flashed drippily,
In my stupidity of the moment even, I assumed acceptance
Unemotional,
Egotistical,
Self-indulged,
Maniac,
Toxic Words,

We're not so different in a sense, you and I.

 

[froggygirl]

hrm.. nice...

 

[Dekloren]

I like ^^

 

[Pantomime7]

I like this. This is something I havent heard in awhile. Very nice

 

[BrightEyesIsMe]

Very nice.

 

[neverwas]

awesome work

 

[cherub]

why does shakespear come to mind when i read this piece?

Definately a very refined piece of your work.

But great none the less

 

[RareForm]

^thanks for the replies.

 

[doofqueen]

really beautiful use of language and desription

 

[Altered_Soul9]

I was just browsing through the old threads and seen this one. Loved it my man. Very Nice!