Tomorrow

[RareForm]

Look at me today,
And I'll remember you tomorrow,
Turn all the lights out,
I'll find you in the dark,
Taste my lips,
'Cause I'll lick them tomorrow,
Close the damn door,
It's colder now that you've left,
But you are insistent not to,
You leave me freezing,
Suffering,
You can always find me,
I'm never leaving 'til tomorrow
I tickle myself,
Thinking of your hands,
The hands that feed me,
I'm hungrier than yesterday,
You will feed me tomorrow,

A blazing red ember sharpens on it's way from
my eye to kill the sorrow subdued by the nothing
of tomorrow, yet tomorrow is another day.

 

[BrightEyesIsMe]

That was good. I really felt what you were saying. And yes tis true that "tomorrow is another day" so we can just try and start all over....that sucks though

 

[cherub]

awwwwwwwww darlin when i read this is tends to break my heart,,,,, you will get through this and many other hurdles in your life.
Remember your never alone.

 

[Altered_Soul9]

Very nice. These words touch me on so many different levels. Amazing write!

 

[DG]

I missed this one. I likey

 

[CHiLD-0F-THE-BEAT]

Originally posted by RareForm
A blazing red ember sharpens on it's way from
my eye to kill the sorrow subdued by the nothing
of tomorrow, yet tomorrow is another day.

^This twists in a way that I love.
Really evoked some strong reactions within me. Beautiful.

 

[TiberCross]

i love how you can put exactly what you feel or think in text. great piece!

 

[Pantomime7]

I can really relate to this piece. The expressed through these words is all to real to me. I feel the raw emotion put forth by this. VERY VERY Nice!

 

[BuddhaSmokedPot]

hey babe i j ust read this .. holy shit.. it is one of the best. good job

 

[FixXxer]

tomorrow is only a day away.

thank you for reminding me why you're one of my favoritye writers on BL.

 

[MynameisnotDeja]

I like this one a LOT!