To wish a mile away...

[neverwas]

To wish a miles away...

I dont ask for much
Never beg with open palms

I dont wonder through the train carriage
Playing my out of tune harmonica

I dont sit here and tell you how to mend your heart

I am not what i say i am
I am not where im meant to be

I work only for myself
I see only what i want to see

And if one day you wake up and for once you surely know
If that one day its for sure that it can only grow...

Embrace me and hold me
Kiss me and fold me

Tell me you love me
Carve in me a part of you to hold

For i am yours forever
If only you could know.

To wish the miles away
Friends

 

[RareForm]

beautiful.

 

[anesthetized]

LOVE IT!!!!!!!!

 

[BrightEyesIsMe]

that was awsome! :D

 

[harraser]

one of your best.

 

[neverwas]

Thanx guys I wasnt sure how this would read. but it seems to go ok

 

[katmeow]

I think this would work really well to music.

Actually, when you first posted it on your journal, I thought they were song lyrics for the music you were listening to.

Nice work

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

one of your best.

Agreed! The song of your soul perhaps?

 

[neverwas]

Agreed! The song of your soul perhaps?

right now...yes...

Kat: its my own work hehe im looking at giving it to a stripper at my work whos a dj and letting her fiddle around with it to see what can be done...

its sort of a working progress...

 

[Strawberry_lovemuffin]

Re: To wish a miles away...

I dont wonder through the train carriage
Playing my out of tune harmonica

I dont sit here and tell you how to mend your heart

^ Sensational lines there Kel. *shivers*

All of it, as a whole too is beautiful.

 

[neverwas]

thanx babe its beenhard for me write things down lately.

 

[sonicnature]

beautiful Kel! I had no idea you had such talent with writing..

 

[Gad]

Beautiful babe...


-Dekloren

I'll have some new stuff soon )

 

[frostyangel]

xoxo miss ya girlie

 

[neverwas]

Awe...

thanx Dek and sonic

miss you to frosty!