"To Rachel, After a Revelation"

[wastedwalrus]

This girl is really helping me keep my life on track right now so I wrote this for her.


"To Rachel, After a Revelation"

Rachel,

Feelings pure and real and true...
With your presence I am purified and pristine.
My eyes no longer draw illusion.
My lips no longer labor for lies.
My smile no longer dims its light.
My self is me and I am one again: blessed and open.

I have been cleansed. I have been drowned
In waters of compassion and beauty and affection
And I emerge, soaked and vulnerable, a different person:
I will find shelter in your eyes and see light in your smile.

 

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This touches me deep.

 

[exoiced]

I have been enjoying your recent posts wastedwalrus. There is something about the way you write that strums my soul-strings.

I liked this:

[My eyes no longer draw illusion.
My lips no longer labor for lies.
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