To it

[Frosty da snowman]

(I don't think I've posted this before. Did a quick search and didn't see it)

And so the clock keeper says it
And we set to it
Goaded by whip, tooth, fist, and nail
Lifting up the heavy burdens to shoulder length and marching militant and ravaged to the sun

And so blade keeper commands it
And we set to it
Caressed by steel, rock, wood, and polymers
Sawing away at listless strangers, wrapping the packages in white and remain nameless behind the pen

And so the gods watch it
And set us to it
Blessed by word, writ, psalms and rites

And so we write it
And set ourselves to it
The false images of our own godhood

 

[RareForm]

And so we write it
And set ourselves to it
The false images of our own godhood

that's amazing.

 

[Frosty da snowman]

^^ Thanks. I remmber setting this one aside to finish it later came back to it and liked better this way then anything else I tried to add

 

[cherub]

Great piece sometimes adding to it can bring it to a lower level. You piece is definately perfect as is...