Time Knows All

[froggygirl]

uncontrollable sensations
Swimming through the darkness
of time
Hate disturbs the sleepless dreams
Numbing sweet starlight
loneliness bottled, hidden in the darkness
of time
Hearts remain unwashed
Eternal sleeplessness, emptiness, loneliness
Shaking soundlessly
Wishes floating aimless through the darkness
of time
Sweetness devours hearts
Full of love and kindness
Starlight brightens the darkest nights as
love brightens the darkness
of time



I went through and picked a whole bunch of words last night, and made a poem out of them.. I don't really think it makes sense, but it was kinda fun...

 

[RareForm]

Hearts remain unwashed



I went through and picked a whole bunch of words last night, and made a poem out of them.. I don't really think it makes sense, but it was kinda fun...

I really really liked that one line...

did you really do that lol? seems to come together really well, great job..good to see you posting again!



~Drew

 

[katmeow]

It turned out well!

I like the format of this, how each section has built up.

Nice one

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

Wow, it really fits together quite well - feels much more deliberate that just a bunch of words put together.

 

[mariacallas]

I agree with drew...froggy i love it...especiallly hearts remain unwashed
I love the images and feelings that line conjures for me!