Time forgets

[Jabberwocky]

Time forgets where the heart and mind recall
subtle queues and frenzied words
two am murmurs about lifes dreams
and the absence in between
bursts of wakefulness
and blissful sleep
rising and falling
a gentle pressure on my chest
between deep breaths
I think:


to tired to leave
to happy to stay
time forgets
even if i remember


rising and falling
my intentions become clear
The future holds no keys
doorways cease to exist
yet a corridor remains
arches stretching their fingers to the heavens
with their silent promise
of redemption

curious images framed
in innocence caught unawares
momentarily off guard
rose colored smiles
belie feelings glimpsed then gone
as i meander on this journey
through the moment of now
staring into the reflection of then
like a chaos mirror reflecting infinity
footsteps echoing in time
a metronome

this that this that this that

back and forth creating a staccato of emotion
that feeling of being
just being
without purpose
exploring the subjective reality
of my reflections
into future paths of perception

 

[katmeow]

This was great. One of your best

 

[Mehm]

great blend of concrete with ethereal. i really liked the wording, flow, and personal emotion as well. thank you

 

[Cloudburst]

You just nailed what I always try aim for: having control over that delicate balance between interpretative unworldliness and explanatory earthiness that is all too easy to tip over. Great job.

 

[thujone]

awesome. totally awesome!

 

[New]

It made perfect sense in the realm of neuronal play.