Through These Eyes

[beanpoophead]

Stars bright
twinkling
in my jaded eyes
to afraid to cry
sing those lullabies
of those dreams
we all used to dream

based my life
on this
captured by eyes
that couldn’t stay
open
long enough to see
everything in me
world jus to bright

wide eyed wonderment
for just a
second
until it slips
through the cracks
that make me look
four years to old
in these eyes

what they’ve seen
to much, to soon
its to late
stolen pride
in my stolen youth
caught in between
seventeen
and invincibility

closed eyes wished with all
they’ve got
to see beauty
somewhere in me
with these lying eyes
closed wide opened
to the drug called life

 

[FixXxer]

... your words are .... touching.. i love your writing. the line that sticks to me most, "to see beauty somewhere in me".. i garuntee there is ALOT of beauty within, and on the outside of you. you are a very good person.. definatley very talented.

good work, keep it up

 

[FixXxer]

jus had to say. i liked this one so much i had to come back and read it agin... very good work

 

[neverwas]

Stars bright
twinkling
in my jaded eyes
to afraid to cry
sing those lullabies
of those dreams
we all used to dream

your writting relates well to me so im bumpin this one back to the top page

 

[cherub]

You express your emotions so clearly it can be nothing but touching to read.

 

[haste]

Very nice