Through the Clouded Clearing...

[burntserkits]

I saw a bruised sky,
tainted with the rage of a dying Earth.

I heard the weeping of entombed bodies
in every one of my breaths.

An angel fell and broke her wings,
she is still in ecstasy, unknowingly.

I have spoken the eulogy of my beloved,
forever alive, but elsewhere.

I smelled the odor of something decaying,
no, of something not yet dead.

I then tasted sweetness in my mouth,
like candy to a child.

I was there, in that moment
lost in Heaven.

 

[Dravidian]

i like that. its dark yet pleasant

 

[Super.Nova]

very creative, i wish i was able to write things like this, i have the brain power to do it, i just cant bring it out of myself i guess.

very good

 

[OpiYum]

I enjoyed the visuals from the words. thx.

 

[Super.Nova]

^Yea thats exactly what i thought

 

[New]

its twisted. I like it.

 

[RareForm]

forever alive, but elsewhere

very poetic, stimulating.

 

[burntserkits]

Thanks you guys. It really means a lot that everyone enjoyed it. It's a little older piece but has been revised several times over the years. Check out my LiveJournal if you want to read more. It's all writing and rambling no blogging, so it's easy to read through...