Three lines

[PixieLu]

And of all the rooms in my childhood,
God was the largest
And most empty.

 

[ice-9]

i'm a big fan of brevity.

(and a fan of yours, too. )

 

[katmeow]

Sometimes a few words can say so very much.

Great!

 

[RareForm]

I liked this one.

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

Good stuff!

I myself grew very dissillusioned with everyone's idea of what God was supposed to be!

 

[Raz]

This doesn't match my personal experience...but I really liked reading it. Very good in that there's so much weight in such little material...

 

[E-girl]

nicely put.

 

[up all night]

My childhood to a T. My life would be so much better if it had never been affected by religion and the doctrines therein.

 

[neverwas]

And of all the rooms in my childhood...

were falsely painted.
with fake smiles,
and plastic tress.




...PixieLu, your peice was shirt but it was very thought provoking. hence so many people adding their own lil thoughts

 

[Cyc]

bump

 

[huntmich]

And god is only the coelescence of all human souls. God is merely everyone together, everyone one, everyone perfect.

One, we are a great force, beyond what anyone can imagine in this plane or the next. Apart, we are merely a splintered energy that can't come to terms with itself.

 

[froggygirl]

Wow.. short and powahful

 

[mealltach]

ouhhhhhhhhhhhhh

wonderful

 

[PixieLu]

oh hey i forgot I even posted this. It's actually part of a bigger poem, but the 3 lines basically reflected how I was feeling that day. Thanks for all of the nice comments and for adding onto it with everyone's own thoughts.

 

[Altered_Soul9]

This was amazing. I agree sometimes less is better. Very Nice.