thoughtless spontaneous bullshit

[lickable_lucy]

its the thoughtless motions
that brought on the crave for one another
in spaces now sitting still they are
yearning for places of titles
hoping for more than words
to maintain
essential body chemicals
tearing through my soul
the strain of expectations
tightening the anxious spaces between them
naturual forces controlled, whats to eventuate ?
hearts move
as do feet
complete
[ 31 January 2003: Message edited by: lickable_lucy ]

 

[plazma]

*Grins*
Its pretty impressive, just like the writer...

-plaz out-

 

[breakyaself]

Oh I like this one too...

 

[katmeow]

lickable_lucy

Worst bluelight name ever


The poetry however, I do like.

It's simple, but elegant. You should write more.