Thought up while rolling and put to paper almost sober

[Larr_E]

To be alone with your thoughts
With no outside distractions
With no friends saying "Hey bro, where are you
going?"
With no mother saying "Be safe mijo.."
With no girlfriend saying "your jacket smells like
perfume."
To sit in the dark
With no visual unpleasantries
With no Do not enters
With no members only
With no colors to hold us back or push us forward
To have the only sound made by a beating heart
With no meaningless banter
With no vibration moving over a drum
With no strain of any sense
To be filled with glee
To be mute
To be blind
To be deaf
To be free...

 

[skjalff]

I liked this one a lot, very moving, last four lines are great, I'll remember those:

To be mute
To be blind
To be deaf
To be free...

Greak work!


skjalff

 

[Larr_E]

Thanks man. At the time I thought it up my friends and I were listening to electronica for about 5 hours straight. I was rolling very hard and just tried to curl up in a ball on the couch and hide from everything. When we finally turned the music off it reminded me about when after a rave the silence you hear on the walk to the car and how happy you are to hear nothing. I just took that to the next level...

 

[CHiLD-0F-THE-BEAT]

This is amazing.
I love it.