Thought of the Day

[Mary Poppins]

Esoteric garble
Or just words on a page?
Punctuated
With oddly syncopated
Rhythms
It’s not hard to see
How they group together
Phrasing elegant similes
(Over-extended metaphors)

Incomprehensible interior
Monologue.

I pen my thoughts as they
Leave
My mind.
Uncensored, unabridged,
Just me.

Afterall:
This sentence
means the same as
this
(sentence).

Unfortunately, I’m not making this up.

 

[breakyaself]

I love your way with words, and thoughts Jill. They really are a startling insight into how your mind works !

Brilliant !

 

[(Wordy)]

Writing about writing always interests me... it's an exercise that usually raises more questions than it answers, but then, why should answering questions necessarily be the goal?

Always a pleasure to read your stuff.

 

[New]

I love the way you arranged this piece to fit the words and to highlight that maybe we're still drawing and looking at pictures, no matter how high-minded we attempt to make our literary excursions.

 

[IXinX]

Very good!