This situations got me perplexed

[Jungle Bunny]

This situations got me perplexed,
because I think of love and I dream of hate…
and you know I wonder, I wonder a lot about things.

Like trails of color and shapes of pink changing as the wind blows within the shade-
My Judas touches me in the dark,
like Author and Sir Lancelot-

As a sweet milk flows from the loins of a mankind’s ignorance to the indifference,
down in the shade.

At me they gawk laugh and stare,
at the freak show passing by-
Extra! extra!
Boy meets guy-
Familiar face not by my side-

Et tu Brutes-
Adams’ Eve-
Disregard my loyalty-
But in the shade away from eyes,
the path less traveled sodomized.

As a sweet milk flows from the loins of a mankind’s ignorance to the indifference,
down in the shade; therefore,
I hear me…
slip away-

And you don’t care.
This situations got me perplexed.

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

I've been wondering what to say over this piece, I know I battle to relate but it is written well. You use certain words cleverly, placed at the right point as if to prod at the reader, and then ever so descriptive emotions inbetween. This is very unique writing, the situation may have us all perplexed but I think this makes me understand just that much more. Thank you for that. Couldn't let it go unsaid!

 

[cherub]

interesting piece,,, very much a likable piece that makes you think... great job

 

[Jungle Bunny]

Thanks B

My favorite tangent:

As a sweet milk flows from the loins of a mankind’s ignorance to the indifference, down in the shade

The why:

As a sweet milk flows from the loins of a man
(Sexual bliss of male climax)
Mankind’s ignorance to the indifference
(Haters of the non-hetro lifestyle)
Difference down in the shade
(Homosexual “actions” kept from the light of day)