(this randomly came out just now)

[grillparzerkarma]

When I don't have anything at school...
I bite.
I feel like hannibal the cannibal.
And I wonder why those girls putting on makeup
Won't leave so I can hear the silence.

 

[FixXxer]

i had to read this at least 4 times.. maybe i didnt catch the picture..
but is there a word missing in this line ?
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And I wonder why those girls putting on makeup
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other than that.. very intresting.. short and to the point

 

[grillparzerkarma]

Some hints to explain:

-it takes place inside a girls' bathroom stall
-I had meant this to be a regular post on a thread in "the dark side." but what I wanted to say just came out in poetry, so I decided to post it here.

 

[Doppelganger]

I'm not really much of a poet myself but I can tell you've tried to say too much, without saying enough, if you get what I mean?

 

[drug_wench]

i like it - its succinct and amusing yet deep, and clever