This Is

[Cosmic Mist]

This is a sort of sonnet i wrote a little while ago. I know that it doesn't follow the strict form that a sonnet should, but it still has a similar structure. Enjoy.

This is the sound of a thousand hearts breaking,
beating, breaking, and collapsing in two.
This is the beat of a mind that is making
decisions leading away from you.
This is the tear that floats like a feather;
clearing the dust as it falls to the ground.
This is the fear that works like a lever;
destroying relations with all left around.

This is the smile that deceives with its innocence:
a mask we all wear to keep out the pain.
This is the wall built high in its reticence
to maintain all as its singluar aim,
and this is the pain that comes from hesitance;
when you see what you want, but can't follow through.

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

I realy liked it, form didn't bother me a bit..

and this is the pain that comes from hesitance;
when you see what you want, but can't follow through.

Ah, so true, nothing like running into the walls you have built, that are now shutting you in as well as keeping others out!

 

[yakksoho]

I liked both the idea and the execution. I think we all can relate to this..

 

[vurtomatic]

I like this for its good allegories.

 

[cherub]

This is the smile that deceives with its innocence:
a mask we all wear to keep out the pain.

This hits home for me,, the whole piece is done with heart felt interest,, I really enjoyed it.