• ✍️ WORDS ✍️

    Welcome Guest!

  • Words Moderators: Shambles

This is either free verse or just crap

Lady Ice

Bluelighter
Joined
Oct 9, 2006
Messages
49
Location
Malaysia
Watch drip, the sanguine to invisible gloss the droplet turned
it is relentless, somehow, with every seconds into hours of night
could it be absolution in the way of my reach for solace ? sweet solace..
confined to a kaleidoscope, in elegant intentional fragments; her bitter repose

The incredulity of her faith so sullenly etched in the delicate boxes she named
crippled by a spirit reliant on changing waters, unvarying tides, and inveigling ghosts
disillusioned in overbearing desolation, somewhere she must live, but where ?
dirt and sugar in a jar, in the guise of ivory dust, to once upon a November belonged

May they in resolute silence remain, to be effaced into darkness, to be yesterday forgot
In her salvage of what was deemed impossible, barren she stands to await her fleeting doom

Come hither, young shadow, you are fear the afraid condemn
beguiling the smile, bewitched under those harlequin masks

Come hither, dear sorrow, I am yours to be wed.
 
I like it. It conveys the inevitability that the the subject hopes doesn't come but braces for anyway. A betrayal of faith to reality that I believe we've all experienced at one time or another.

Keep writing. I'm enjoying what I've read so far.
 
Top