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This is a sad poem someone sent me....

TecknoticDream

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*Near to the door*
*he paused to stand*
*as he took his class ring*
*off her hand*
*all who were watching*
*did not speak* *as a silent tear*
*ran down his cheek*
*and through his mind*
*the memories ran*
*of the moments they walked*
*and ran in the sand hand and hand*
*but now her eyes were so terrible cold*
*for he would never again*
*have her to hold*
*they watched in silence*
*as he bent near*
*and whispered the words..*
*"I LOVE YOU" in her ear*
*he touched her face and started to cry*
*as he put on his ring and wanted to die*
*and just then the wind began to blow*
*as they lowered her casket*
*into the snow....*
*this is what happens*
*at parties*
*When friends let friends*
*Roll on E*
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Work like you dont need the money,Dance like no one is watching,and love like you have NEVER been hurt
 
Oh my.
Tell me, did the original version have anything to do with alcohol? The whole class ring thing sounds REALLY outdated.
Maybe it should read:
*Near to the door*
*he paused to stand*
*as he took his glo kandi*
*off her wrist*
OH. Wait a minute. A 0.43 second search on google yielded:
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/the-inspired-buffalo/message/96
WITH THE HOLIDAYS IN FULL SWING THIS IS GOOD ADVICE TO FOLLOW
Subject: Fw: Send this back, you'll see why
(deletia)
*this is what happens*
*to man alive.....*
*when friends let friends....*
*drink and drive.*
 
i remember the first time i read this poem, i got it like a year or 2 ago in an email as well. it is a very emotional message (even though it looks like its bee edited through time). everyone should take this to heart. i had a handful of friends killed by drunk drivers. it hurts a lot of people.
 
I took this email seriously the first time i had heard it too. But it was talking about drinking and DRIVING, not just drinking.
If the altered poem had said...
*When friends let friends
*Drive on E
...then i might have taken it a little more seriously. But this is just saying that she is dead because she took a pill.
newbies should do a little reading on this site before they start posting!
 
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