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Robdob

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Joined
Mar 21, 2001
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Location
Laguna Hills, Ca, USA
You are looking
But you do not see,
So cliche...
Waiting for a delivery
But what was it that you ordered?
Something to do with time...HA!
Maybe it will be love
Scratching at your heart
Oozing thick with impurities
Scabing over with hopes, dreams,
A future you cannot create...
No, that wasn't it either. Not tonight.
Tonight, we desire something more
Tangible, more definable. I present to
Your imagination this box.
I present it to you
Empty. It is your job to fill it
With something all your own.
Close your eyes, take it. Alter your
Life this one little bit. Imagine
Your dreams. Stuff them into this box one
By one, and hold them in your hand. You are
In control... But now what,
With your eyes open, the box
Is gone, your dreams lost. You ordered,
But has there been no delivery? Keep looking,
One day you might see.
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EveryOne is so concerned with heroine and marijuana,
but they fail to see the most dangerous narcotic that exists.
That is the narcotic that is injected into the minds of infants.
It is called social narcotics.
[This message has been edited by Robdob (edited 18 April 2001).]
[This message has been edited by Robdob (edited 23 April 2001).]
[This message has been edited by Robdob (edited 23 April 2001).]
 
Lame as I may be, I am giving myself a bump. I like to keep my stuff together. If you think this is good please tell me. If my work sucks or makes no sense, please tell me. I value all of your guidance in my mixed up world. Thanks.
 
*thumbs up* i really like this actually.. i dont understand why no one replys to the posts in this forum anymore.. too much talent going unrecognised..
 
nice one Rob
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still think you should fix that one part to make it more clear, but very enjoyable
 
maybe it is hard to decide what is desired by the writer... ...criticism here i guess... ...but i like this piece...
Thanks. I enjoyed the stimulation.
 
Its very good Rob!...many thumbs up! I prefer pieces you have to actually think about...
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keep it goin..
plur
hrg
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Every person in our lives is a mirror reflextion of ourselves.
 
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