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CHiLD-0F-THE-BEAT

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.:Thin-Wishes:.

Butterfly wings
Like shards of glass
Jut out from my insides.

Their gaudy
Shelled remains
Are dry
The breeze wills them to fly.
 
This is such an excellent piece.
I read it today from school when I saw it on your LJ and it struck me then and does so each time I read it. Such a sophisticated and graceful piece, there is so much vision present.
The title makes me wonder if the wings represent these 'thin wishes', if they are thin themselves.
 
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