There was a crowd (Up in My Head)

[cosmic charlie]

There was a crowd
Up in my head
Their glowing bright
And turning red

From sunburns
And harsh lives
With old friends
And new minds

When names change
And boundaries fall
When every breath
Involves us all

 

[coelophysis]

Sing it

 

[cosmic charlie]

With the Space Man

 

[lostNfound]

Enjoyable.

Re check your Their, There & There though.

 

[thujone]

nice, keeps great cadence. i love short, thoughtful poems

 

[hbrewste]

i really like this. i like that it's shorter.