there once was someone

[shibby treats]

There once was someone
Whose face was not unique
Their air was all the same
And they spent time in gardens
Long stone walkways
Its nothing to be taken
Like a Sunday in May
Just a walk down the brick road
A smile until you can finally greet
The one person you have waited for
Your entire life
Nothing should be said
You hold hands
And exhale
The sun shines off a tear
And the afternoon arrives
There’s no use
You sigh
And let go
Of your day.

 

[up all night]

Ohhh I liked it. Great work.

 

[neverwas]

Just a walk down the brick road
A smile until you can finally greet
The one person you have waited for
Your entire life
Nothing should be said
You hold hands
And exhale
The sun shines off a tear

you brought a smile and a memory to my face

 

[ButrosButros_Grantos]

I have no idea why, but I found this piece to be extemely profound, and it lightened my mood, thank you.

 

[shibby treats]

thank you for the positives! **

kinda went out on a limb posting this as my first one on bl.. i feel more motivated now to post more creations

 

[chrissy]

please do

 

[TiberCross]

i enjoyed it.

 

[up all night]

thank you for the positives! **

kinda went out on a limb posting this as my first one on bl.. i feel more motivated now to post more creations

I for one would love to read more of your work.

 

[E-girl]

awesome!

 

[up all night]

I was looking for something else and found this. Still beautiful.