The Walk Home

[CiscoKid]

Just a little somethin I wrote, lemme know what you think


The Walk Home

Sun goin down now everythings dark
Sky turns black I watch the lightning spark
Shadows crawl and the thunder starts to talk
I smell the concrete as I continue my walk

Not a good day, tomorrow could be better
I can’t rely on my luck like I rely on the weather

Can’t talk, my mind’s in a hurry
The way I’m movin kinda makes my vision blurry
Tryin to act sober but I can’t even concentrate
Try to battle it out between the love and hate
Had a long day, now I can’t stay awake
I got the chills and I can feel my body shake

 

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It seems like your poem is about being unsure of yourself, which I can relate to.