the unwanted finale

[CrYsTaLe]

staring in the mirror at a face that I dispise
a point of recollection hidden beneath the lies
what happens when the person that you've come to be
is the one person from which you can't break free?
when the past becomes to blurry
and the futures closing in
Do you supress the fear of change
when the beginning starts to end?

 

[Altered_Soul9]

I loved this babe. Very Nice

 

[RareForm]

i liked the tone of this one....nice little write STALE bread.

:D

 

[Red Koi]

i really like this one...

its a theme i can relate too, only expressed much better than i could've managed

 

[cherub]

Feeling this so much, especially today, and it is a definately good write that i am sure alot of people can relate to. This is always a plus to catch the reader. Well done !

 

[CrYsTaLe]

thanks so much you guys, its great to be back!

 

[Pantomime7]

I love this! very, very nice. It's great to read something from you again.