the truth..

[frostyangel]

The best part of my life,
is when I look into your
eyes.. they are like an
endless crystal blue
ocean, that I would
dive into at any moment
or any chance that I
could get.

I can't blink, for I
might miss something..
I'm totally capitivated.

I can remember the first
time we danced so close
holding one another tight..
From that moment you made
me feel so safe..

You make everything seem
so right.. I could die an
endless journey wrapped up
in you.. my motions are
weak..

You make me feel as if I
am the most beautiful girl
in the world..

You make me feel as if
there is no end in time..

You make me want to be
a better person in this life..

noone else
could ever make me
understand, the things
that you do..

Noone else could make me
see .. how it is to be..

To be lost of words and
short of breath; giving
a warm hearted smile that
will not erase..

When I was alone.. and I
couldn't phone you..
I was so lost..

But, I closed my eyes..
remembering the way you
ran your hands through
my hair.. even on it's
knottiest day..

How you would run your
fingers tracing my face..
Even on it's oilest day..

How softly you would kiss
me ... making my heart
flutter.. no matter how
bad my breath..

How you would watch over
me during the night..
No matter how loud I would
snore...

This is which you choose
to adore.. for once in my
life.. I am opening my
wings.. allowing you to
take ever inch of me..

I waited for you to say
these words.. now I can
finally tell you how I
truely feel.. I don't
have to hide it anymore..

I love you..

Don't ever let me go..

 

[bisKi]

one of the best ode you can write for someone you love :D
*huggerz*

 

[Raz]

That was so sweet and such a joy to read :D

Nice work

--Raz--

 

[The HiVe MiND]

u nearly made me feel the love u have 4 this person

 

[Jungle Bunny]

Babes

I like how you depict very sweet things with a raunchy bitter follow up. I.E oily skin, nasty breath. It keeps in real. I found myself thinking, "WOW these are very self conscience things". The fact that your narrator is not concerned only entrances me to believe that indeed the scenario of love is genuine. I'm smiling babes I'm smiling!