@ndy
Bluelighter
Hello, this is some random writing I just found on my computer that I wrote during the summer, I don't know how well you will be able to follow the plot line, because these are just scattered subplots, that could stand alone, but are actually part of a collection that holds a little more congruity. Tear it to pieces if you want, I could always use some advice. Here ya go:
This subplot is titled, "Research Chemicals"
The haze slowly diffuses and I am sitting in a white room, with a few doctors around me. I can’t handle this. What is going on? Their faces are glowing with darkness, and malignity. There is a table full of metal spikes, and drills, and knives. The tools are picked up and examined by one of the doctors. White and light, and lab coats. Note taking and shiny tools. Everything is covered in blood, and I realize that I have numerous holes drilled into my skull. I am bleeding profusely. I am hooked up to some machine that is stopping me from bleeding to death. I get the sickening feeling that they are experimenting on me. A woman approached me with a small yellow pill with the number 205 on it. She picked up a tool that was basically a big metal clamp. She inserted the tool into my mouth and slowly started to turn the crank. My mouth slowly was forced open and when it became as open as it could get she gave the crank one more turn and I heard a loud cracking noise. My jaw literally split apart. I felt warm blood spilling down onto my bare chest. Quickly a hypodermic needle was shoved into my mouth and a numbing medication was injected. The woman handed the yellow pill to one of the lab coats and he approached me with a slight smile on his face. He forced the pill into my now limp mouth and once it had completely dissolved he backed away and started a watch. This was unnerving. All of them were alternately staring at their watches and me. My arms started to tingle, my fingers were ice cold. My head started to pound. My heart was racing. Help me. My body started to convulse, thoughts started rapidly flashing through my brain. I’m dying, why is this happening. My vision faded and was replaced by images of my mother. Lights and then, blackness.
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I awake on top of a red pyramid. It was blazing hot. I could feel every bit of moisture in my body evaporating through my skin. I was shriveling up, raison. The blocks the pyramid was made out of resembled a type of paper, with the individual scraps being triangular. I shook my head to clear the haze out and when I lifted my vision to the opposite end of the pyramid there was nothing at all. So I will stop, shift into gray, no more vision, smell, hear...I hear...I hear...
Like glass, underneath, slowly melting, and oozing to cover your eyes, in liquid calm.
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OK! That's it! Tear it to pieces! Thanks for reading, I really appreciate it.
*edited for grammar*
[ 21 March 2002: Message edited by: @ndy ]
This subplot is titled, "Research Chemicals"
The haze slowly diffuses and I am sitting in a white room, with a few doctors around me. I can’t handle this. What is going on? Their faces are glowing with darkness, and malignity. There is a table full of metal spikes, and drills, and knives. The tools are picked up and examined by one of the doctors. White and light, and lab coats. Note taking and shiny tools. Everything is covered in blood, and I realize that I have numerous holes drilled into my skull. I am bleeding profusely. I am hooked up to some machine that is stopping me from bleeding to death. I get the sickening feeling that they are experimenting on me. A woman approached me with a small yellow pill with the number 205 on it. She picked up a tool that was basically a big metal clamp. She inserted the tool into my mouth and slowly started to turn the crank. My mouth slowly was forced open and when it became as open as it could get she gave the crank one more turn and I heard a loud cracking noise. My jaw literally split apart. I felt warm blood spilling down onto my bare chest. Quickly a hypodermic needle was shoved into my mouth and a numbing medication was injected. The woman handed the yellow pill to one of the lab coats and he approached me with a slight smile on his face. He forced the pill into my now limp mouth and once it had completely dissolved he backed away and started a watch. This was unnerving. All of them were alternately staring at their watches and me. My arms started to tingle, my fingers were ice cold. My head started to pound. My heart was racing. Help me. My body started to convulse, thoughts started rapidly flashing through my brain. I’m dying, why is this happening. My vision faded and was replaced by images of my mother. Lights and then, blackness.
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This ones untitled
I awake on top of a red pyramid. It was blazing hot. I could feel every bit of moisture in my body evaporating through my skin. I was shriveling up, raison. The blocks the pyramid was made out of resembled a type of paper, with the individual scraps being triangular. I shook my head to clear the haze out and when I lifted my vision to the opposite end of the pyramid there was nothing at all. So I will stop, shift into gray, no more vision, smell, hear...I hear...I hear...
Like glass, underneath, slowly melting, and oozing to cover your eyes, in liquid calm.
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OK! That's it! Tear it to pieces! Thanks for reading, I really appreciate it.
*edited for grammar*
[ 21 March 2002: Message edited by: @ndy ]
