The Tao of Hunting? hmm

[Gamecat]

it's over
I guess
The hunter goes home
I still see the trail
but the game is long gone.
Do I give up the chase
is it worth it no more?
Still the trail is there before me
and the prey doesn't seem to far
I hear sounds sometimes
little glimmers of hope
that maybe I shouldn't
give up the fight
it's a sign should I keep going on?
I just don't know
so tired so weary
but the prize...
so great
and who am I lying to
myself?
with a sappy song and
the same stupid feelings
the hunt never ends but
you always run away
so close this time
but it's not to be
you'll always alude
though the capture
will be bliss
for both parties involved
for when its all said and done
and I truly go home
the hunter dies
just like his prey

 

[ice-9]

i know exactly what you mean.
nice visual words, excellent metaphors.
Good stuff.

 

[fizzygirl]

awwwwwwww

{{{{{hugs}}}}}
wanna run off to the bahamas with me????
i'll be a bartender on the beach and you can make films that end with the sunsets