The Sweet breeze

[ChemicalSmiles]

Autumn breeze frigidly touches ailing dreadful lives
Harshly darkness quietly surrounds the broken souls
Mellow serenades that once played between hearts
Pathetically have transformed into bitter sad songs

Somewhere beyond the flossy clouds
Cupid has lost his romancing arrows
Plays sad sonorous tunes on his bow
Dedicated to all weepy lonely hearts

Howling chilly wind blows through the mist
Sounds of sorrow spread allover the place
Fuzzy humid air submerges the inner lust
Lives decay slowly as the autumn leaves fall...

 

[Bomboclat]

I really see and understand your viewpoints and agree with them slightly. Life is a garden, digg it.

 

[ChemicalSmiles]

I really see and understand your viewpoints and agree with them slightly. Life is a garden, digg it.

Thanks I appreciate the honest feedback. I feel i'm getting a little bit better each day!