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The Spoon & the Needle (oldie, but one of my better ones---sick & twisted & true)

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The Spoon & the Needle (oldie, but one of my better ones---sick & twisted & true)

6/21/02


The Spoon And The Needle

By Tanya (TJ)

All around the pile of glass
The spoon chases the needle
That’s how the crystal goes so fast
Through the kiss of the steel

Why bother with a teenager
When an 8 balls so much meaner?
$250 gone
Poof! Through the needle

Taking the spoon by the hand
On the dance floor with the needle
To music by the Cotton Band
Better than the Beatles

Up and down
Round they go
With Tina see them
Do ce do

Kick to the left
Stepping to the right
Tina wants to dance all night!

Bump and grind
With rhythm and rhyme
Shaking her booty
To her partner's behind

Spoon to the left
Twist and shake
Needle to the right
She seals her fate

Into the cleft of the spoon she goes
Dancing with water,
A top she knows
Delving into her loins
She's melting here goes!

Here comes the needle
His ass is big
He grinds her into the spoon
She digs

Next comes the cotton
A little tight ball
Horny and hot
A sweet little doll

She screams out in ecstasy
She's wetter than hell
The needle sucks her juice so well
He should serve all eternity in jail

Fast and furious
With lust and desire
The spoon and the needle
Are hot and on fire

There's no turning back
I'm ready to go
To dance with the rig
Tonight I'm his ho!

I see my forbidden lover
His energy, his presence, radiating like no other
That stance he takes
Says it all

Unrequited danger is he
He summons me
Daring me to take the bad boy on

I quietly submit
To his razor sharp kiss
Into his arms I melt
Sweet surrender, such bliss
Is the needle's sharp kiss

"Welcome home my love," he whispers
My Spike, My Steel
My Rig, My Point, My Sexy Outfit
My One True Prick,

"You waited for me!," I say
"Of course, my silly bitch
I told you before
You will once again
Be my own private whore

Not just for a week
A month or a day
I'm a jealous lover
But patient beyond all reason
I'll prove time and time and season

I don't care how long you venture astray
I'll always be with you
No matter how long you’re away

One day you'll come back
To submit once again
As my servant, my slave

Remember I'm the only One
Those sacred vows you took for fun
Will never be undone

You were my wife,
A marriage of bondage
I was your pain, your passion,
Your chain, your life

Come my sweet mistress
My slut, my bitch
Let's go on a trip
To the stars and get hitched"

"My lover, my prick,
My devil, you DICK
Come taste my blood

My passions are high
Come drink from the well of my veins,
Get drenched in the flood

Feed your perversions,
Your sinful desires
My heart is aflame
My innocence tainted

Your danger enticing
Your poison is great
Your lips tasting of venom
I love to hate

"Yes Your Corruptness
I see you haven't changed
Your flavors of deceit,
Ever so exquisite they range!

I'm back once again
My giver of pain
To revel in the stick
As my blood wets your dick

I missed you my asshole, my master
For what is a man?
But a life support system for a COCK!

My true husband you are
You're my dream, my star
Whether near or far
You're forever in my heart
No matter how long we're apart

Even though evil snake
My soul you can and will take
If given your way
Your prisoner I would stay

But unlike other men
I know where you've been
I know how you are
And what to expect

Cunning, seductive, such masculine strength
I'm awed by your charms
I have much respect,
You go to great lengths

To take me to places,
Without you I'd never go
You've a million different faces

You're my teacher, my preacher
My Judas, my savior,
My enemy, my best friend

You are my contradiction
You're a thorn in my side
You're my pain, my rose
From you I cannot hide

For now you are my love
My Romeo who shines bright light above
You're my needle and spoon
My poison I love

I'm back lover boy
Let's go for a ride
To the end of creations

My lips you will kiss
Wrap me in your bliss
You bad boy, you master of intoxication

Take me to eccentric creations
Show me your new, electric sensations
Take me to planet intoxication!"


"My mistress, my slave
My lover, my wife
Come let us repeat our sacred vows
I don't care for how long
A week, or for life


My illicit lover and mistress
With this needle I thee wed
I will keep your illusions alive
And your monkey fed

Until your veins are dry
And your soul is bled
I will protect you at all times

From life you so dread
And deliver deception
Until the day you're dead."

"I will not promise forever,
Your Deadliness," I say
"Humor me then",
He says with an evil grin

Ok what the fuck
For old times sake
I'm completely insane
A glutton for pleasure and pain
To you, I repeat my vows again

With this needle I Thee wed
I will forsake all others
To be with you instead
Until my veins are dry
And my soul is bled

From this day forward
I will take only you to bed
And love ONLY you
Until the day I'm dead.

His eyes light up then he says,
"Promise to obey me too?"

"You're pushing it my sick,
Sorry ass lover
Of blood spilling,
Corrupter of virgin veins

The day I promise to obey you
Is the day the quest
For intoxicating chemicals
Ceases to plant the seeds

Of corrupt desire in human kind
You'll have a mighty long wait
I hope you like to masturbate."

"That's what I love about you," he says.
A defiant slave,
Is a delightful slave,
Waiting to be broken."

There ends round one
Of a wicked jig
With the spoon and the needle
 
Holy Fuck Monkeys, that's a long poem!

I like the hoedown/nursery rhyme quality you've got going.

The first two lines are great:

All around the pile of glass
The spoon chases the needle

The humor throughout is really effective, too.

If anything, I'd say it's a bit too long. Though, scanning through it, there's not that many sections I'd cut. It's fucking epic. Maybe if you tightened the rhyme scheme a bit, the length of the poem wouldn't be an issue? I don't know. I'm curious what other people think.
 
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