The River

[psycosynthesis]

They ran
across the
slow river
and gradually sank.

Across the river:
they sank gradually
slow and ran.

Gradually, the river
sank and they ran
slow across.

The river ran gradually,
slow, and
they sank across.

They sank slow, and
the river gradually
ran across.

 

[Jabberwocky]

i actually really liked this exercise. When we can look at the nature of words and the arrangements therein we can come up with a whole new world of exploratory writings.