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the place between the bass (long).

.dR spgeddi

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THE PLACE BETWEEN THE BASS
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Wall popping powerful music that
you can feel in your nut sack.
makes my cheeks glow and my mind relax.
Great walls of sound rushing at you,
pushing you back
from some massive speaker stacks.

Talc on the floor and i'm flying
and soaring, then riding the flooring
as the 808 tweaks out the rhythm
to some stupid twiddly sounds until even…
they pop.
the crowd whistles in unison
the speakers emit a high pitch unusual sound,
that distorts and contorts
and crackling from those tops
indicates the impending crescendo,
but just before your ears pop
a pounding from the bass
reminds you just how big is the space
where it opens your ears up,
and your nipples go hard.

Sharp scissoring and sizzling,
searing and screaming
garage treble seemingly,
unbearable.
Crazy amounts of strobe lighting
through smoke and purple cans pumping
and best of all
a remote vantage point,
private enough to sit and absorb...
impenetrable.
30,000 watts vibrating and hissing
yet warm and rumbling underneath.

Happy faces
and people with their hands in the air,
a flash of you standing here…
a flash of you there
and then its not you
and you walk right by me,
was that you, is this me,
OMG you’re right here beside me.
Riding with me, surfing with me
just absorbing all the energy.

Look at her, look at him…
fuck it, lets get out in the middle and swim
in the vibe.

But someone cast “time-stop”
That’s when the bubble popped
And I stepped into this other dimension.
You were all motionless and pixelated
It was as if the whole room dilated,
The sound went off,
Except for a soft,
High pitched frequency sensation.

Now I stand and ponder
What’s going on here?
And did someone just whisper my name?
From over there, or was it there?
Holy fuck, what am I doing here?
Then that’s when my whole world changed

Was it delight or mad fright?
When the pixelated dots of light
Simply collapsed in a pile on the floor before my eyes,
My whole world was immediately dark.
So I went for the floor,
What seemed 4 metres or more,
Further away than it had ever been before,
And the total of my thoughts was, FARK!

I closed my eyes twicely
Tried scrunching them up tightly,
But I could see more when I had my eyes shut.
Now the sounds coming back to me
But it’s not what I expect it to be
Instead it’s some tribal chanting and stuff,
And as if the record’s scratched its r-r-r-repeating,
Two bars of a devilish demon speaking.
Now I’m really peaking,

HOLY FUCK!

Two inch animated gnomes,
Each purple green or yellow,
Transparent and in the dark they glow,
And dance around gayly in a square
Which I assume is the edge of the room…
“Paging dr spgeddi, paging dr spgeddi….
May we grab the b-bulberator b-b-back?”
And B-BOOM!
That’s when the bubble popped,
And I returned to this very room.
 
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.dR spgeddi said:
is it strange of me to expect a comment when i post my words here... am i spastic?

so many new posts, so many posters, so many peices...so lil time to read em all :) sorry i missed this. i always like reading your work.

this brought back a lot of 'memories'...

QUOTE:

I closed my eyes twicely
Tried scrunching them up tightly,
But I could see more when I had my eyes shut.
Now the sounds coming back to me
But it’s not what I expect it to be
Instead it’s some tribal chanting and stuff,
And as if the record’s scratched its r-r-r-repeating,
Two bars of a devilish demon speaking.
Now I’m really peaking, HOLY FUCK!

Two inch animated gnomes,
Each purple green or yellow,
Transparent and in the dark they glow,
And dance around gayly in a square
Which I assume is the edge of the room…
“Paging dr spgeddi, paging dr spgeddi….
May we grab the b-bulberator b-b-back?”
And B-BOOM!
That’s when the bubble popped,
And I returned to this very room

/END QUOTE

they way uve written this is very suited to the experience i think a lot of us can relate to ;)
 
Re: the place between the base.

.dR spgeddi said:
Wha-what’s what, wha-What what?
Oh fuck, already I’m lost,
How quick I forgot, I’m completely off…
Um something?
“Was it my face?”
“Was what your face?” my mate exclaims
And I start to question whether I’m thinking aloud again,
As I quietly disassociate
Couldn’t possibly continue to sociate.
“Thanks mate…. “
I think…..

Dude, that's the best rendition of that whole crazy-ass disasociation experience that I've read. Confused, but it captures that whole idea that even when you don't know what's going on you're still totally aware that you're a mind which doesn't know what's going on. If that makes sense.

Nice work. :)
 
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