The One For Me [Aperture/Need]

[nearjat]

Like an angel appearing when you least need her
my muddy brained honey gots the creed of the leecher
tagged on her sneakers sleeve heart bleeders
love like they need her
tough scars mirror
Sorry baby my starry eyes recently died
kissed with blindness serenading to the sky
my angel horror story thats the way it goes
a fable never sober- when straight enough it shows

and also (wrote this really out of my mind anxious just rambling hahaha)

Last minute wake up there's only break up
only erupt, never enough, always too tough
rough housing tripped lousy loose language like phonics from Ousley
Pardon the break free lately beneath surface readings bleed like on the doppler
forcast chopper usually straight but dont hate lucy landslide dropper
stop her- captivating five star rating not affiliated painting rush stays hush under raps- in the city buying naps- stings like a smack things get sticky take a shot at the map like lookin for gold bars in your lap- you haven't moved stuck in a groove you're just a shade now, and tailor made.

 

[coelophysis]

9.3

Followed by a 9.5.
The way it was written made me read it quick, nice flow, but it resulted in me having to read it more than once to fully absorb it. If that's a good or a bad thing is up to others.. I've already told you what I grade it as.

 

[nearjat]

Thanks maaaan It was fun too write, although I probably should have been paying attention to the lecture as I was in class haha

 

[Dubulous.]

yo that last one was sick.

I finally found a website where people know the art of freewrite...

all these years wasted on hip hop sites...

 

[nearjat]

Thanks man I kinda want to start emceeing but I don't have the voice and energy haha