the night

[BrightEyesIsMe]

I walk in and see all of the colors of the dresses that cascade before me
Flowers held or pinned show through the dark
Tuxedos wander from here to there
Bouncing curls, sparkly eyes, fake nails, colognes and perfumes
Plans of the after math even in the midst continue
The music plays, so lost in thoughts that it feels more like a dream than reality
Friends flow around speaking and dancing in traditional motions
A man runs the music that plays and shouts over it
The night soon coming to an end as we all fall into the wave of the sounds together
For one last chance to be free together
The flowers begin to wilt
The dancers get hot
The music softens and the clock ticks 11:00 pm
And it is time to move on from here
Time for the parties that may follow and time to go home for others
The prom is now over
One more milestone finally crossed and over
Goodnight to my fellow seniors now is time to grow up

J. Love

 

[RareForm]

original, and beautifully word....great job

 

[Altered_Soul9]

^^I agree completly. Beautifully worded. I really enjoyed the last two line...Masterful. Very Nice

 

[cherub]

Girl you have many milestones ahead,, this is great. Alot of time if we write down our moments in life they are never forgotten but remembered in words.

well put