The New Rhymes

[realm]

The New Rimes

I think it's about time for a new Rhyme thread, seeing as the old one is totally dead, buried, and rotting...so i'll start it off.


LOST! in all that coulda been
confusing thoughts knowin that i shouldnt sin
so put it in--the bread basket and laugh
its very passive but every thought u have--
--its all accounted for-every dirty floor
every scream you spat---had sex and wanted more
its all the core-never could be bought at any store
your mind is what you make it thats why no man can fake it
they can only play it-lesson learned
thats why the best will burn the world will turn
and every day we movin on for bad or good
its all your attitude-just play it cool
do what you gotta do-never make a comprimise
every man is just a wolf creepin in disguise
thats why they say the windows are the eyes
and always know age does not determine who is wise
its all a feelin call it foolish pride
so-who-can-ride-and-tell-me-where-they-wanna-go-
-its-all-a-show-to-show-the-better-show-
-i-betta-go-to-getta-a-setta-dough-
-dont-let-it-go-pressure-pressin-on-ya-clavicole-
-you-gettin-dotted-like-a-calico-thats-how-i-roll-
-so-all-you-bitches-hit-the-do'-


That last 6 lines are meant to be said in one breath so read it quick

 

[RareForm]

heh. nice.

 

[realm]

c'mon i know there are more lyricists on here! lets get this thread going :D

 

[(Wordy)]

realm, do you actually put any of your stuff to music?

 

[realm]

check out this link http://www.myspace.com/realm305, i'm currently working on an album but that site will give you a sample...if you're interested in reading more PM me and i'd be happy to send you some stuff


might as well post more, somebody else is gonna rhyme in here damnite! lol


choose a side lose with pride we pickin winners every time
every rhyme i spit is on a dime-call it crime
we cause monoplies--honestly im possibly
the one man down for robberies-we call it mockery
im off the satellite
thats why cats wont battle right? they saddled tight
ride or be ridden! go getter always about that pro hittin-
there's no limit my scopes hidden-youll get caught like low jack
check the old tracks-im still raw and ready to come back
in fact ive done that-my past is like a gun rack
fuck your love taps i bring fists to knife fights
i like livin thats why im still survivin right?
overall we blow gats hold straps with no slack
on the chrome bats ready to boom bap-(bap bap pap)
now you learned a lesson-you dont deserve to test this
youll make a mess kid-fuck the bullshit you stress with
twist sacks-kick back-get on the click clack
or get ya wig smacked

 

[Along For The Ride]

Slices envelop ya pain, left ya fellin stranged
Somethin changed as ya paced thru the pouring acid rain
Freedom slain in this placid game of tragedy, had to be
The one to commit the fallacy of this masterpiece
Semper FI glass 12 inches thick, separates the glass
At last, my temper, lyrical blast, separates the mass
Of people in the steeple prayin to god that they’re all equal
When reality exposes that they’re really just deceitful
In their own ways, caught in a gaze, of what’s really right
Stop being the dictator of lives and live your own life
I try to live my own, overthrown by the government
Found out it’s unworthy as I watched the stable rubber bent
In my mind… Designs of incriminating crimes
Heard it all before, should’ve watched out for the signs
Got a glimpse of what’s to come as I stare at my hands
Feel the bands on my speeches left me speechless, sinking sands

-KS

 

[bmwdrifter]

http://www.myspace.com/8974564ythgf

check this out...me and a fellow bluelighter

-CP-

 

[realm]

check your pm's bmwdrifter. not bad along for the ride, how long have you been writing?

 

[RareForm]

i really like your writing realm. i actually checked out your myspace page.. and i'm diggin' it. alot. not the stereotypical voice. i sent an add request under the name 'Gravitate Elysium'. so expect that.

-- maybe i'll try to whip something up to put in here.

 

[realm]

Thanks alot bro, i actually just got your FR right now. I know what you're saying about the voice, i get that from just about everyone who listens to me, it really is the only reason im considering hip-hop as a serious career. Glad you're feelin my music bro, i'll have an album dropping by the end of the year, all high quality recording and production, all the tools i use to record are professional grade, and my production team also operates at a professional level as well. Hopefully BL will bring me some unexpected album sales haha Keep the rhymes comin' i'm glad to see there's some hip-hop culture on BL

 

[bmwdrifter]

realm- sorry man i cant pm due to my status of greenlighter...pm me with your msn or aim name and ill let ya know

 

[Along For The Ride]

http://www.myspace.com/8974564ythgf

check this out...me and a fellow bluelighter

-CP-

That would be me and you mafucka. haha. Well realm i have been writing poetry all of my life, and writing raps seriously for like... the past 5 months or something around that. Me and BMWdrifter have our little group thing goin on, although no one from our town really makes their own stuff. We have been workin on shit outta my garage and thru my computer for a few months now :D We still have alot of finishing to do, but check it out.

 

[Along For The Ride]

Is it so absurd that I wanna write my own words?
Annihilate the sentence bitch defenseless death into a hurse
Had a little sting but I managed to pull thru
Lost my right wing but I managed and still flew
Where do I turn when the bridges get burned?
No concerns, jealous of my game, watch and learn
Stick ya little quicker with the mind of death or sicker
Droppin KS with a bangin beat is a damn good mixture
Back to lesson, keep ya guessin, its ya name i've snatched the blessing
I aint stressing Just anticipating unsafe minds aggression
whats in question? It's ya name, minds design, I'm attesting
OR maybe it's ya head with beats and rhymes I'm infesting...?
Anyways put it to the test, if ya pass
then you graduate, from this place and don't come back to class
and don't take advantage of the things that come in last
cuz with a broken leg you don't walk quite as fast

Oh yea, if you wanna hear this in the song I rap it in check out this link and go to the song "Broken Dreams"
http://www.myspace.com/8974564ythgf

-KS

 

[(Wordy)]

Hey realm, checked your myspace - very impressed! I liked 'Roll n Ride' and 'Feel the Steez'. Thought the synth-based instrumentation on 'Roll n Ride' worked really well... has an almost electro feel to it (old school electro).

Also checked yours, bmwdrifter and Along For The Ride. Nice work.

Never ceases to amaze me how much talent there is around these parts.

Carry on with the rhymes...

 

[Along For The Ride]

Thanks man, well we try at least :D It is hard for white rapppers to get known in the game these days, but it will be all worth it to show my kids when I'm 35 that I was rappin back in the day

 

[realm]

thanks wordy im feelin the love! all the beats are made by my producer in california, i'm in a group we named 7 Notes and we've all been togethor for about 2 years, personally i've been rhyming for about 8 years now and i'm just starting to get a buzz. In the past i've worked with a few famous local dj's on some tracks, DJ EFX who produces Smitty's beats and also produces, "Diamonds On My Neck", As well as DJ EFX, a Florida legend for his scratching and production work.

We have been workin on shit outta my garage and thru my computer for a few months now :D We still have alot of finishing to do, but check it out.

Yo along for the ride, what type of equipment are you using to record with? I'll tell you my setup; Blue Baby Bottle Mic, Focusrite Platinum Trackmaster Pro Preamp, Pro Tools for recording sessions, I also have an Isolation booth fully padded inside and out with Auralex Wedge Tiles. Next step is a MacBook Pro, and an MBOX2.

Me and BMWdrifter have our little group thing goin on, although no one from our town really makes their own stuff.

I actually have a track i've made with my boy from Seattle, i believe he has his own studio and has a producer, check out his site at http://www.myspace.com/thabmc


But fuck all that let's get back to the rhymes!


its quality not quantity---remember---no man can measure what i got in me
but im no prodigy im just another product of theology
but i believe in god because he sees my squad thru all the stormy fog
so thats tight--leadin me just like a flashlight thru all the black nights
im all alone just me and pens throughout the cruel world
tryin to find a cool girl to call it peace with so i can buy 'er new pearls
all my dreams never seem to add up-im ridin thru this hell and now im saddled up
paddled up the stream just like a salmon does-im after almonds by the pound and trust
you know im makin it cuz im always rollin thru the dust
so now im movin full ahead-a throughbread
cuz im no failure like my teachers said-a little drop out tryin to cop kraut
never listened in class thats why im locked out-im goin all out
youll never know extents of all the depths ive pressed and moved
you better step or else your death is due-so check the tune
and keep a tuner tight in clutch-catch me smokin a pipe n dutch
youve had enough? well im still rollin right around the block
but you know im on the clock id rather not id rather cop a quap
i got extensive plans to be dumpin cheese like oil pans
im more loyal than--an average killin kid--im sober-but im takin hits
you know the way we play is serious--so take a day--
and think about it-ring around the rosey better call it quits
this life is it-and when i die i dont care when, or why
just make it fast so i see less violence through these lonely eyes

 

[Along For The Ride]

Coming on strong like the skunk from the bong
Saying that your wrong but I knew it all along
Used to be a rookie then it took couple times
Just a pad and a pen, and the beat and my mind
Spittin lines like my rhymes, depend upon the time
That is wasted in the blink of the eyes in my prime
Just a playa with a plan, and a hope, and a verse
Try to hide emotion but ya see right thru my shirt
And it hurts just to know, I was loved but not no mo
Please don’t speak those lies, you hoe
Please don’t act surprised, when I flow
About the time wasted, and I don’t think that u know
About my pain, about the strain
About the ways I watched you change
All the pain brought with the blame
I sit and laugh, a loveless game
Quick to empty clips while I dip
On the side line ya find that I don’t trip
Just a spitter in the game, use my brain to pass the time
Not a quitter, spit these words that swim right up ya spine
inspection fore ya pull ya pearl gripped weapon
Realize I aint messin if you step in my direction
Only for protection or endanger of my life
Bringing mass aggression as I charge you with the knife


-KS

 

[Mehm]

just some rhymes is just on page two
but fuck it, its busted, let's start something new
my attitude is rude to dudes with crews and blue tooths glued to their few remaining temporal audio cell receptors
land in jail or texas, I fail to see like my eyes passed through black n' decker blenders
so check your mirrors
the title wave cometh
plummet to the ground and hang on with energy ropes protruding from your stomach
want some dumb shit? I'm on it.
I'm smokin half o blunts with pumps in my trunk, on my way to the spot ta B and E this punk
got there and jumped him with a chair cause his hair laughed at me
he just stared and slapped me. turned out I hit a delusion cause I was seeing double from to much caffeine
not rapping, just happened to say some stuff that rhymes I guess
peas

 

[Along For The Ride]

^ Nice usage of wordplay man. I like seeing diff techniques

 

[Along For The Ride]

It’s a rarity, burning rhymes blinding lines of clarity
All the mobbing tweaks think it’s a parody, rarely
I find the time to cleanse the lines before the enter into minds
I centralize the true despise to bend designs, vast enterprise
The realization hits as the time fly’s away
Look forward to tomorrow, wash away this gloomy day
Spirits raised just to fall again, living just to die
Don’t ask why, as you closed your eyes, where true hatred lies