the last sunrise i'll see w/you

[RingsOfSaturn]

like the weight of the sky
came down on me last night
your words crushed me and took my life
i never asked you to leave that other guy
always assumed forever you'd be mine
always pictured you right by my side
maybe that's the price i had pay
never thought it's go on to be this way
for all the hearts i've broken
all the girls i've stolen
veronica,vivian,betty,bonnie,anna,leilani
more than i can count
give my body away
to the prettiest eyes
sweetest smell
or smoothest thighs
it was all just a game
all the words to them i said
it was all just a show
until they awoke in my bed
but for you the love was real
holding your hand, the pulse i feel
until i heard the words you said last night
driving you home and watching the sunrise
i had almost forgotten how it felt to cry
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if you rave for drugs,you're not a raver,you're just a drug user. yes, i drop, but i don't *need* to drop to have a good time. you go sober, i go sober.

 

[poezante]

omg! i love that.. thank you.. very well written

 

[eidolon]

This is one of the best I have read in a long time.
I am sure that this can touch a nerve with most of the guys on this board.
That was very deep, thanks...
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Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life.
-=R a n d y=-

 

[Expansion4u]

Utterly Fantastic!
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You can only MindFuck yourself!

 

[the^sneeker^pimp]

omg! i am a girl, and to me that is probably the sweetest poem i have read i a while cause it touches on an issue that most women struggle with....
thanks!
kim
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