the fucking nerve you posses is staggering

[Furnace]

You waltz in and out of my life
with the grace of a buttefly, caught on fire.

My fields have been covered in black oil,
and now, just now, after all of this time,
your draining has commenced.

along with all of that blackness,
some of which I held on to,
along goes every image I have of you,
every word, every feeling you ever had melting into the sludge.

and now, again, you try and set the butterfly on fire.
with your wicked words and your evil stare.
Turn around, you fucking little bitch,
and never look back at the time,
where you came close to destroying me.

Here's to years of me living well
to spite the time you had me
under your thumb.

 

[Rollingrrl]

I can really relate to this especially this:

and now, again, you try and set the butterfly on fire.
with your wicked words and your evil stare.
Turn around, you fucking little bitch,
and never look back at the time,
where you came close to destroying me.

as always Furnace you're amazing! if you ever stop writing I'll kick your ass!

~Shelly~

 

[Frosty da snowman]

the anger in the title, and overall throught this is starggering. Great piece.

 

[247]

two words
raw and real

 

[up all night]

This piece made me glad I decided to have a peek into Words.

 

[Cosmic Mist]

you know, i don't know what to say. makes me feel a bit uncomfortable actually. Had you written this 5 years ago, you would have taken the words right out of my mouth...

 

[vurtomatic]

with the grace of a buttefly, caught on fire.

beautiful line

 

[mariacallas]

awesome hon.

 

[cherub]

Your work always blows me away hun, great stuff and very moving

 

[Raz]

Here's to years of me living well
to spite the time you had me
under your thumb.

Wow, that's so bitter but at the same time kind of empowering....that was great dude!