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The Fibonaci Ego

punktuality

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Two different poems below under the one heading.

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I,
I,
I am,
I am one,
I am one of you,
I am one of you poor lonely souls,
I am one of you poor lonely souls who are all lost together,
I am one of you poor lonely souls,
I am one of you,
I am one,
I am,
I,
I.

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One,
Day,
Someday never,
comes all the time and,
I keep trying to make some sense,
Present tense is all there is, I remember tomorrow,
Just like you can see me yesterday, right now in those imaginings, I can see inside.

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Now I keep trying to assign numbers to the letters and wondering if they add up!

I love the first one, it has such obscurity, yet able to be valued by the less obscure interest. :)
 
As always... I like your work. Different style of expression, but it still has your unmistakable quality to it.

Nice one =D
 
Brilliant, your first piece actually delves into the loss and rediscovery of self that is associated with drugs and the loss of identity. Well done :D
 
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