The Death of Time

[Pantomime7]

Time, the essence of life
The destruction of formality
Time deserts us
Leaving us to wither in self loathing
My inhibitions fail as you crush my desire
I linger in darkness While a prayer of forgiveness leaves my weary lips
Forsake me, turn your back and bury me beneath your cherished wing
I break my brandished wrists
Yet freedom's breath yields the pain
Your cry of defeat echoes through the permeable screen
I escape this prison of hostility
only to breach into a world of hate
You laugh as I realize my fate
I lower to my knees, fall to my face
Time dies with my final breath

 

[RareForm]

pretty good...i liked the theme...

 

[aliasgrace]

Time, the essence of life
The destruction of formality

Those are really powerful lines. You really have a way with words.

 

[Altered_Soul9]

I was there when you wrote it...I really think its an awesome piece. Very Nice

 

[CrYsTaLe]

I really like it.....I had to read it over a couple of times to get the full effect but it's really good!!!

 

[faceless_shadow]

very powerful words....it has a good flow to it