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The *DEADLINE* FOR ENTRIES for the PAMPHLET CONTEST is JUNE 12TH!

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here it is, copy edits and all; I hope everyone likes it.
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as usual, any more critique is always welcome. BTW, was the prize ever decided or is it supposed to be a secret?
 
^I don't know what the prize is... I guess wait until IndelibleFace announces it or thinks of something, haha.

And the pamphlet looks great! I can't think of anything else I would add or change.

Let's see what other Bluelighters have to say! :D
 
Shit Imma try and turn out another one. . . lol. But I has to admit BM's is pretty much this shit. :)
 
serotoninstorm said:
I'm blown away blagmarket! What a great first post!
+100
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Agreed. Very nice work blagmaket :)
Are you sure you want to list MDA and MDE as "common adulterants" since they're already named in the first paragraph as Mdxx?
Where it says "taking breaks while raving to cool down" I'd change it to "taking breaks while dancing to cool down", since "raving" can mean just being at a rave I guess.
That's about all I can think of, great job :D
Is this going to be 1 sided btw? And if not have you given any thought to what the opposite would look like? Just curious. I meant to ask Damien that as well.
 
feelgoodhit said:
i love that one BM! i see a spelling error though: "assay" should be "essay".
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"Assay" is actually correct.

Function: noun
Etymology: Middle English, from Anglo-French assai, essai — more at essay
Date: 14th century

1archaic : trial, attempt
2: examination and determination as to characteristics (as weight, measure, or quality)
3: analysis (as of an ore or drug) to determine the presence, absence, or quantity of one or more components; also : a test used in this analysis
4: a substance to be assayed; also : the tabulated result of assaying
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There, you learned something new. My day has meaning now. :D





NICE entry! So glad you decided to help us out -- we are grateful.

All we need is a few more -- anyone else willing to try?
 
thanks everyone, I'm glad you like it, and as for changing raving to dancing, good idea, I changed it and posted the new version.
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It was my understanding that this was going to be a single sided flyer that would be printed by the average person, and unfortunately, the average person doesnt have a printer that can pump out double sided prints on heavy stock glossy paper so creating a second side would only end up making the overall design muddy and the paper oversaturated with ink. If its getting printed professionally though, then I'd be happy to make a second side.
 
Just a suggestion....

Don't say "you can control this by:"

instead say "you can minimize harm by:"

because your actual "control" is limited. You don't want first timers to think they have absolute control over any of those things.

Nice job! :)
 
AfterGlow said:
Just a suggestion....

Don't say "you can control this by:"

instead say "you can minimize harm by:"

because your actual "control" is limited. You don't want first timers to think they have absolute control over any of those things.

Nice job! :)
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good point indeed, I changed the file so you can see the changes in my last posting of the flyer. Thanks for the suggestion afterglow
 
Damien8787 said:
lol sounds like a plan! :D

This is a rough, resized, something or other. Suggestions/criticism more than welcome.

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I already see some things I am going to change and I have not spell checked this yet.
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That looks nice man
 
i'd love to give it a try if i get a little bit of time this afternoon.
hopefully!

amazing work, both of you! :D
 
lastnight said:
i'd love to give it a try if i get a little bit of time this afternoon.
hopefully!
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Please do. There's not much of a time limit right now.
We're just trying to get a good selection of entries to choose from. Go forth and create!
 
I'd love to throw a little sumthin' sumthin' together as well... just a matter of me throwing that PS:CS disc in... but I'm just sooooo lazy!
 
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