The Day I Die

[colicolo]

The Day I Die

I hope it rains the day I die
And all your tears are washed away

I hope that there is thunder
To applaud you for all your support

I pray that there is lightning,
To give you a spark to move on

May the cool air give you a fresh starts
And I hope the next time you see the sun
You are reminded that I have taken the darkness with me

..::Colin::..

 

[alostlittlebird]

I really like the way you used storm words to carry the idea, very unique

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

This was simply wonderful colicolo!

 

[Dandy]

Great piece,
the weather words/references made the piece.

 

[human paraquat]

^i agree. quality work

 

[cherub]

i love the sweet under tone for such a subject so many shy away from good work !