The Contents of My Cares

[IXinX]

I am proud of this poem.
It says who I am well

 

[(Wordy)]

I like it, and I love the fact that you've posted a photo of it. It's awesome to see the state you composed it in, handwriting complete with madcap doodling! :D

Don't know about everyone else, but I for one would like to see more people showing the 'face' of their writing just like you have...

 

[IXinX]

Thanks Wordy.

Yeah i was going to type it out and figured i'd be lazy and take a photo and post that instead.

 

[chandler]

I agree with Wordy... I can read so much into the spacing, size and styling of the letters. Particularly the last two lines - the stuttered gap in 'fru stration' and large emphasis on 'cannot deduce'.

Maybe it was intentional, maybe it was subconscious, maybe it was nothing at all! Nevertheless, the content is also good, and I can see where you're coming from.

 

[Raz]

I think breakabeat was the last person to do this....I really like it; so much personality comes through when you can see how you originally wrote it out, and it adds that much more meaning to the actual writing imo..